literature

Do You Believe Me?

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Love is hard when you lose it.
Killing when you need it;
-And can't go back.
To complicated and confusing,
When first found something you remember,
Somewhere new.
~
If I told you I relate,
Would you believe me?
If I told you that it's true;
The more you remember,
The more it hurts?
-To remember "I love you"
Do you believe me?
This is actually a comment I wrote for *ohsostarryeyed :iconohsostarryeyed:
On her piece ~what are tears~ (Link)

Enjoy! :thumbsup:;)

Comments are ALWAYS welcome!
I would love to hear your opinion about my work.
Creative and innovating criticism is always great, an praise is wonderful.
:glomp:

-Peace Out. :peace::D
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Kumicoo's avatar
Hi

beautiful your poem. You are right love is complicated ... I'd like to read some of what I write. accept comments n_n [link]